Writing Success

Here are some of our amazing sentences from Hub 5/6 today. Prepared to be impressed!

I hear the foxes creeping towards me in the distance.
BOOM, CRASH as the tree fall to the ground.
Again the voice of the wind called. "Come here little one." 
SPLOSH as I jump onto the soggy wet grass.
I feel the trees blow against my body. I feel cold.
I see swirling leaves as they dance all around me.
I am surround by darkness.


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