{"id":4363,"date":"2016-05-30T21:31:00","date_gmt":"2016-05-30T09:31:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.beckenham.school.nz\/?guid=f9f99c9979774343b04af0e6b0e99e0f"},"modified":"2016-05-31T11:03:02","modified_gmt":"2016-05-30T23:03:02","slug":"awesome-writing-in-hub-56","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.beckenham.school.nz\/index.php\/kowhai\/awesome-writing-in-hub-56\/4363","title":{"rendered":"Awesome Writing in Hub 5\/6"},"content":{"rendered":"In Hub 5\/6, we have been focusing on improving the quality of our writing. This week we have been writing moments in time which have a strong focus on writing in the present and using powerful language to describe what we think, feel, hear, smell and see. Here is a small sample from today's writing. We used this image to assist our writing.
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I can see the smooth branches up above me. The moon is peeping through the branches. I can hear the wind whispering, telling me to come here but I don't as I know it's a trap.<\/i> Zara B

All I can hear is the whistling trees above me. I feel the twinkling stars inside my heart. The moon shines down on me. The trees look knotted together like the wood on a cubby house. <\/i>Zoe C

I feel the mud anchoring me to the depths of the forest. The moon shines it's light as it pokes through the clouds. The booming thunder makes me shiver with fear.<\/i> Mila

I feel the soft wind as it splatters against my face like a water gun. I see the shimmering moonlight creeping through the cracks in the clouds. The trees are twisted together like a pile of knotted string. <\/i>Jesse

BOOM! Lightening bolts crash above me. I feel scared. The forest smells old and damp like a one hundred year old man. The trees twist and turn, knotting themselves together like the wool in my nana's basket. The moon peeps through the cracks in the forest. <\/i>Eva


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